If the title has you thinking that I’m going to offer an amended version of the Declaration of Independence, think again.
Could be read as argument for editing. Got to better result. Mabe should have one more word: John Thomson Hats.
EB White’s first principle: omit needless words.
I see now you call Franklin’s story ironic so my point is obvious. I’d still add back “Hats”.
Could be read as argument for editing. Got to better result. Mabe should have one more word: John Thomson Hats.
EB White’s first principle: omit needless words.
I see now you call Franklin’s story ironic so my point is obvious. I’d still add back “Hats”.